iridesence by princehenebeng

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She watches the cerulean twilight shimmer iridescence…

Thoughts swirl like butterflies in a dance of dreams…
Glitter inspiration…
Igniting illumination…

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Lost in amongst these very thoughts….

She writes her soul…
Bared for all…
Vulnerable visions lie cloaked in ephemeral euphoria…

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Here are her words…her voice…
Her essence…
Growing in Night’s elucidation…


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    ΅〜 ೋღ  Christina ~  ೋღ 〜


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42 thoughts on “Iridescence…

  1. very nice…..thoughts swirl like butterflies and dance in dreams. to me in a metaphorical element that dreams don’t necessarily occur just like that. sometimes there is a little bit of struggle to reach them. your writing style i’d have to peg it as elegant. that’s my take. what’s my score on a 1-10 on that analysis> well you could tell me what you think of my metaphorical interpretation. even if it isn’t yours and I found a new one that’s a good thing too…haha.


    • Thank you ever so much don! I would have to agree with your interpretation of the metaphorical element about dreams…because that’s one of the things I love most about writing…is how each person will interpret the words individually. Thank you also for your very kind words…I am well happy and honored for your thoughts on my writing style! ~ Lol I have to agree, again, that your interpretation is new and a good one as well!


  2. I love the imagery of this. The way the first stanza opens, the thoughts, the nerves, the way she opens herself to the world saying “here I am … see me”

    Another piece of poetry that shows your ability with words and another part of your Dreamscape. Absolutely brilliant.


    • Thank you so very very much Alastair for sharing your thoughts!! It is always so fascinating to read how they are interpreted. It never ceases to intrigue me which images or feeling(s) they may (hopefully) evoke to each person. Thank you again for your awesome sweet praise and encouragement!! 🙂

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      • I agree. It is amazing and amusing to see how one thing can be seen in so many different ways. It says a lot about your writing though. If it is linear then there is only one way that it can be seen, How yours is written though, can go off in so many different directions with a different view for everybody who reads it, and sometimes, more than one view for any person. Your previous poem, I saw that in two ways, both with completely different meanings. Love it


  3. I love the photo, it is reminiscent of the seventh Doctor’s credits don’t you think? Anyway I am digressing from the real important point of the comment. I see this as a poem of two halves…

    Part the first was very atmospheric, a mingling of thoughts and Dreamscape combining together, like colours running into each other to form something new and vibrant.

    Your conclusitory (yes it is a real word) passages were all about the purity of the writers’ soul and how her words define her. I think that the visuals you conjured up as a backdrop to the words written gives a wonderful contrast.

    The night always leaves people vulnerable but the words seem so different and full of hope in the light of day.


    • Thank you so so very much….it makes me proper smile to read your wondrous words! To describe such an awesomely intricate and vivid interpretation of the picture this painted for you.. in such a magical way is a happy gift…to say the least! I most especially love the your last sentence…


  4. You paint pictures in the minds of your readers, at least in my mind, you’ve achieved that seamlessly! As a writer, I’ve imagined all sorts. Your subject is alluring, beautiful and definitely troubled. You’ve scored a point here, because you seemed to accurately paint the picture of one of my characters in a book I’m yet to finish!
    Great words as always my friend. Keep ’em coming!
    Much love, and do enjoy the rest of your week!
    🙂 🙂


    • I’m just smiling so happy and honored Seyi! 🙂 To do as you shared, is a fascinating and wondrous feeling…to be so unknowingly similar! Thank you so so much!! You always give me the such amazing and cherished encouragement, it truly means so very much!! 🙂 🙂 I hope your weekend is an amazing one! Love and Blessings sweet friend ~


  5. Well done Christina 😀 You are doing this on purpose ! I won’t sleep tonight as I’ll be up pouring over another dog-eared dictionary. Keep the coffees coming 😉 Big hug. Ralph xox ❤


  6. This poem seems to express the essence of what a writer must feel, a sense of vulnerability but willingness to lay that aside to express what is in her heart. I feel this is just the beginning of a beautiful ride for you Christina, one we all look forward to taking with you.


    • Thank you so much LuAnn…it really does feel that way! 😀 ~ Your belief is me is so amazing, I always cherish your words!! Though, it is *my* honor to have you on this epic quest with me. You do make me feel as though I could fly dear friend… Sending love and hugs! ❤ ❤ ~


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