Celestial space…a place where thoughts…imagination…ideas… words… prose… and dreams dwell…
Their minds meet mutually in a way neither has known before…..
He challenges her…
He encourages her…
Magnetism drawing them closer…
She sees him…
He sees her…
He captures her heart…
She captures his…
Each willingly surrendered to the other…
Their souls entwine…
He holds her close…
A kiss tells them each more than words can express…
They share everything…
Precious moments fill each day with laughter…adventure…shared perfection…
The sands of time flow faster than the rushing river…
He promises her forever…
She desperately wishes to believe him…
Their last embrace with a final kiss…they must let each other go…
She watches him walk toward the plane waiting to take him away…
She turns so he won’t see her tears…
She walks away…with such sadness…
Feeling alone but for all those magical moments that remind her of his love and devotion…
Her love for him growing…evermore…
In the silence of his absence melancholy her new companion…
She listens…smiles in remembrance…
His last words fill her mind…
“This is only our prologue…”
Copyright © Christina Brownlee 2013
34 thoughts on “Prologue’s Promise…”
This is excellent, his final words being … this is only our prologue, I can’t wait for the next alluring installment. What will happen next? Such a beautiful and joyous beginning to a romantic adventure! Sensual, but also nurturing her and waking her to all she can be. Love it! 🙂 xx
Thank you so much!! I’m waiting for the next alluring installment too hehe! The muse shall visit again I’m sure….igniting all good and wondrous words!! It makes me so happy you love this!!! 😀 ❤ ❤
Aww…! This is such a lovely piece of share.\m/ 🙂
Wow, wow , bloody hell .. wow!!!
This is incredible!! I thought your last piece was your best, but that pales in comparison to this, Prologues Promise is ingenious. The feeling that pours out from this; you can feel the love. you can feel the passion. It is fantastic.
I agree with Penny. I can’t wait for the next instalment. As the Doctor would say … Fantastic
I am so very very happy you loved this! That I could impart emotions through my words…well you’ve given me a huge smile today sweetest friend!!! Your praise means the world to me… Thank you so so very much!! Hugs ~
“Loved” is probably the wrong word. It is not descriptive enough. “Magnificence” “wonderful” “brilliant” “elegant” “splendid” and still not words enough to describe how good it is.
It is a piece that I could read several times.
Thank you again…so so very much!!! I wish I had better words than “thank you” Hugs! ~
AnElephantCant spell fantastilicious
But that is what he wants to say
Once again sweet Christina
The beautiful dreamer
Writes how love makes all doubts melt away
AnElephant always gives me the most wondrous praise!! It makes me so happy that you enjoyed this foray! Thank you so much….hehe I am a dreamer….a hopeless romantic some would say… Huge hugs!!!
This is as stunning as “stunning” can get.. 🙂
Thank you so much for such a beautiful and most appreciated compliment! 😀 !!
🙂 ur poem deserved it and so much more;)
Evocative, provocative and beautiful are just three words in a huge list I will use to describe this piece. The delicious melancholy of the temporary leave taking is heartrending. I to am looking forward to the next instalment. xxxx
Oooo that’s quite a list of such wondrous and magical words….I do love your words…delicious melancholy….indeed!! I am more than exceedingly happy you enjoyed this…I think the next installment will surprise even me! For while the idea is in full form…the words have yet to fall into their proper places…. xxxx
Hopefully a wonderful beginning to what comes next & forever…
Thank you so much Rosy!! One can always hope…and dream!! 😉
She should have got on the plane with him OR he changed his mind and came back out of departures into her arms which is what I would have done. But that’s just me. I wonder how your well written piece unfolds Christina my friend. Ralph xox 😀
Ralph!! You would leave the departures gate….you romantic charmer you!! 😉 I am, as of this moment, unsure where this little journey will take me…take us all….but I do know the words will come and I being so gracious….will let them take the lead! xox 🙂
I am looking forward in where you go with this Christina 😀 xox
Thank you! Me too…hehe 😀 xox
Sometime absence is required to feel a person’s presence more intensely . . .
The Prologue may remain… Like Keats said- ”There’s a holyness in Heart’s affection”….I don’t know…They/their Heart’s affection may live for an eternity… Sometime I wish for such love……
Love This work Christina….
Excellent… Absofreakenlutely Brilliant….!!!
Kazi…I think you are correct….absence certainly increases the desire for the Heart’s reunion…completion. I love the quote you shared from Keats…simply exquisite!
I cannot remember who to attribute the quote I’m thinking of at the moment…perhaps Rumi? It is “That which you seek….is seeking you…” words to ponder my friend!
It makes me so happy that you love this! Your praise is fabutastically awesome and will stay with me in the form of a smile…for a long long time….thank you so much!!
So lovely, sweet and excellent 😀
Have a sweet day !
Thank you so much sweet friend!! You’re awesome!! Hope you have an awesome day as well!! 🙂
I cannot read any of your poetry and not feel deeply of many emotions. You leave an imprint on our hearts with your words Christina. I agree with everyone else, can’t wait for the next installment. BTW, can you send your muse over to teach mine a thing or two? 😉
LOL You are too sweet!! Of course I shall share all I have…and I would like to share that after reading this…my muse once again took over…so I need to give you an extra special thank you for inspiring me and encouraging me…you are so very appreciated dear friend ♥♥ !!!
So powerfully romantic and sweet
Thank you sweet friend! It was the feeling I had when writing this 🙂
Oh Christina – somehow I have not been receiving notifications on your posts… I just popped over to check if I’ve missed anything and then find this…
Your poetry… so very breathtaking — always bittersweet — Your last line just gave me chills. Just beautiful my beloved friend — I will be reinstalling my “follow” here and hopefully will not miss out in the future —
So much Love and Hugs ~ Robyn x
No worries dearest friend…I have heard that happening to many people…must be all the upgrades WP is working on or something. 🙂
I am always filled with smiles and such joy when I read your generous praise! I am so happy you enjoyed this one…it is very special to me. So, to read your beautiful thoughts well…thank you beloved friend!!! Love and Hugs ♥♥♥♥!!!
Wow on this !!!!…truly fantastic …i could go on and on ,but i better go on and read it once again 🙂
Thank you so very much! I am so happy you enjoyed this! 🙂