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I’ve been thinking of you…
Dreaming of every detail…
Your voice when you speak my name…breathless…
How you would look into me when our eyes would meet…
Our souls touching tentatively at first…
Seeing…seeking…knowing…
How your eyes would sparkle when you’d smile at me…
Your smile bright as a thousand suns….
Adoration in your gaze…
Your words whisper intrigue…aphrodisiac….seducing me…
I’ve been thinking of you…
Of the times we say nothing…conversations through our heated gaze… unable to look away…
Yes…I’ve been thinking of you…
And I wonder…do you think of me?
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Very very nicely written Christina. That’s what a heart full of love for someone sounds like… very endearing. huggggs.
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Thank you much Roxi!! 😀 I’m so happy you enoyed this. It is a heart full of love…for my dream… {{Hugs}}
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So preciously beautiful, Christina.
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Thank you so very much Esenga!!! I am so happy you enjoyed this. My apologies for the lateness of my reply…I am hopeful to be back on the scene again soonest! I hope you are well sweet friend…blessings ~
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Che bellissimo sguardo d’Amore!!!
Complimenti Christina !
Un saluto dal mio cuore
Claudio
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Grazie Claudio! La tua lode è così bello e più apprezzato dolce amico!
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Grazie!!
Tenera Amica dal Cuore dolce come l’Amore!
Claudio
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Language of silence always touches the soul…
Exquisite !
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Thank you Horus…so much! Silence can be rather powerful! I am so very appreciative of your thoughts on this piece…
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AnElephantCant stop dancing fandango
Another exquisite piece from Christina
Her eyes sparkle bright
In a thousand suns’ light
The sky is bluer and the grass so much greener
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AnElephant gives the bestest comments and always makes me smile hugely!! 😀 Hugs!!!
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The words you’ve added since I first read this are perfect, they keep the rhythm and make the piece more powerful. You already know my thoughts on the majority of this, and let me tell you real time critiquing whilst you watch me is a heady business, but the connotations are more profound now. I could read this all day. Now if there was only some way to badger you into posting more frequently…xxx
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Ste J…I am so very very grateful for your thoughts and insight on this piece and admittedly most happy you liked the changes. You do help me strive to make each piece the best it can be. Badger away…I am indeed lacking in the frequency of my posts…I always am so appreciative of your praise and encouragement! xxx
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Aye, me and my over enthusiasm for your posts…you don’t need much help though, you have al the words and magic at your fingertips, it is enough for me to try and keep up.
Your changes enhanced the whole work, t’was an honour to get the preview and see your thought process. It brings a whole new level to your work, most intriguing…xxx
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Seeing through the eyes can say so much. Beautiful, Christina.
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Thank you so much Alastair!! You are always so very generous with your praise to me sweet friend…I do appreciate you so… Hugs ~
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You are always welcome Christina. I always find your poetry inspiring and moving. You allow the reader to see things as you do. You have a wonderful skill
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Your words flow so beautifully in this work Christina and touch something in the core of us all. What a joy it’s been to experience. Thank you.
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Oh! Thank you Rick 🙂 I am exceedingly happy you enjoyed this…and shared your wonderfully encouraging thoughts!!
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Wonderful Christina, I think the wonder of peotry, is that the emotions come through the words and the feelings are universal. I can feel and relate to this. All of it. Very well written. Thank you for sharing! 🙂 Needless to say I love this!
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Jonathan…thank you so much 😀 !!! Yes…I love the ability for poetry to say so much while using so few words…fascinating! It makes me smile hugely that you love this!
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a thousand splendid suns. shine bright, friend 🙂
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Splendid…indeed!! 😀 Thank you sweet sir….am always more than so very appreciative of your encouragement… Hugs!
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Very very nice 🙂
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Thank you Celestine! 😀 So so much!!
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very nice
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Thank you 🙂
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Very breathtaking Christina!
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Wendell, thank you so so much! My apologies for being so late to respond. Been a very busy few months but I am back and hopefully will be able to visit soonest! I hope you are well…blessings sweet friend!!
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