Whisper Intrigue…

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Whisper Intrigue...

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I’ve been thinking of you…
Dreaming of every detail…
Your voice when you speak my name…breathless…
How you would look into me when our eyes would meet…

Our souls touching tentatively at first…
Seeing…seeking…knowing…
How your eyes would sparkle when you’d smile at me…

Your smile bright as a thousand suns….
Adoration in your gaze…
Your words whisper intrigue…aphrodisiac….seducing me…
I’ve been thinking of you…
Of the times we say nothing…conversations through our heated gaze… unable to look away…
Yes…I’ve been thinking of you…
And I wonder…do you think of me?

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29 thoughts on “Whisper Intrigue…

    • Thank you so very much Esenga!!! I am so happy you enjoyed this. My apologies for the lateness of my reply…I am hopeful to be back on the scene again soonest! I hope you are well sweet friend…blessings ~

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  1. AnElephantCant stop dancing fandango
    Another exquisite piece from Christina
    Her eyes sparkle bright
    In a thousand suns’ light
    The sky is bluer and the grass so much greener

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  2. The words you’ve added since I first read this are perfect, they keep the rhythm and make the piece more powerful. You already know my thoughts on the majority of this, and let me tell you real time critiquing whilst you watch me is a heady business, but the connotations are more profound now. I could read this all day. Now if there was only some way to badger you into posting more frequently…xxx

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    • Ste J…I am so very very grateful for your thoughts and insight on this piece and admittedly most happy you liked the changes. You do help me strive to make each piece the best it can be. Badger away…I am indeed lacking in the frequency of my posts…I always am so appreciative of your praise and encouragement! xxx

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      • Aye, me and my over enthusiasm for your posts…you don’t need much help though, you have al the words and magic at your fingertips, it is enough for me to try and keep up.

        Your changes enhanced the whole work, t’was an honour to get the preview and see your thought process. It brings a whole new level to your work, most intriguing…xxx

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      • You are always welcome Christina. I always find your poetry inspiring and moving. You allow the reader to see things as you do. You have a wonderful skill

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  3. Wonderful Christina, I think the wonder of peotry, is that the emotions come through the words and the feelings are universal. I can feel and relate to this. All of it. Very well written. Thank you for sharing! 🙂 Needless to say I love this!

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    • Jonathan…thank you so much 😀 !!! Yes…I love the ability for poetry to say so much while using so few words…fascinating! It makes me smile hugely that you love this!

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    • Wendell, thank you so so much! My apologies for being so late to respond. Been a very busy few months but I am back and hopefully will be able to visit soonest! I hope you are well…blessings sweet friend!!

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