Divine Torment…

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waiting seaside

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Can you feel my presence?

I can feel yours…

Enticing me…

Sometimes you’re like a soft breeze…

A delicate whisper…

Gentle and knowing…

Beckoning me…

Sometimes you’re like waves crashing…

washing over me…through me…intoxicating me…

Can you feel it?

That illusory electric spark…

Magnetic…

Addictive…

Taunting…

Seductive…

Divine torment…

waiting twilight

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You want me?

Come find me…

Make up your mind.

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This is the last of a fictional series that began with Edge of Peripheral & Decadance In The Dark. I have to give special thanks to Eris of Discord for sparking my imagination with an incredible poem in the comments of and  inspired by Edge of Peripheral.

Also many many thanks to my other amazing friends who requested I do follow up to the first in this entertaining little surreal fantasy.

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Copyright © Christina Brownlee 2013

33 thoughts on “Divine Torment…

  1. Absolutely amazing. To come out with three fantastic poems so close to each other, all fictional are .. well, brilliant is the only thing I can think of. I love the idea that you did the trilogy of poems.

    Your imagination is matched only by your skill with poetry., Awesome 🙂

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    • Alastair, thank you so much dear friend…might have to disappoint you in there is a fourth coming…so it is no longer a trilogy…hopefully you will like it anyway 😀 Your praise is always so generous and encouraging…you are appreciated! Hugs ~

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      • Oh wow. I can’t wait for the last piece. It is now a quadrilogy 😀 I’m sure I will like it. I haven’t found a poem of yours I haven’t liked yet. And you’re welcome.

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  2. Another top bit of blogging, each line seems (to me at least) as if it’s said on a breath of wind. To me it gives it a melancholy ans altogether solitary air. Almost gothic. I like a lot.

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  3. Trilogy!! YES! Love this dear Christina ~ something about your writing is just addicting. This last group — mystical and magical… like you are a ‘spirit’ ~ waiting in the shadows to bless some lucky creature! ~ Enjoyed immensely – will you go for part IV? ~ Hugs to you beloved friend ~ Robyn

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    • Robyn…thank you!! So happy you enjoyed this…was really quite fun going to the fictional place….might move in there haha! You are such an encouragement to me….in fact…your description….has indeed prompted a fourth…guess it’s a series now? lol Thank you beloved friend…always so very very appreciative of you! Hugs and Love ♥♥♥♥!!

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  4. This was so seductive and sexy. I can feel the want as I read this. Loved every word of it. Hope you don’t mind if I reblog this on my blog.

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  5. Oh Christina, it seems as if you have released some bottled up emotions and I can just imagine your fingers flying over the keys as these feelings become words on the screen. This trilogy is truly brilliant. Your writing just continues to get richer and deeper.

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    • LuAnn 😀 Yes!! It did seem that way…thank you so much sweet friend for your encouragement and generous praise!! I am…just so happy it has been so well received…in fact….it’s not a trilogy anymore….there is a fourth coming…I am really really enjoying the fiction of it!! 😀 Hugs ~

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    • Haha!! Oh…I really did laugh out loud!! Yes…fiction….love or lust? Well that’s up to the reader now isn’t it? Each piece of writing is intriguingly interpreted differently by each person 😉

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  6. AnElephantCant interpret poems sensibly
    Although he does try to be quite intriguing
    Is this fact or fiction
    AnElephant’s predilection
    Is almost interesting but totally fatiguing

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    • Thank you! 😀 I am indeed….a hopeless romantic! I believe love is the greatest gift given to us mere mortals….in every aspect…children, family, relationships, friendships…all of it…so very precious!

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  7. Brilliant Christina, I love your last three sentences,

    You want me?

    Come find me…

    Make up your mind

    They are striking in their simplicity, but at the same time full of mystery and promise, guille and secrets, with an invitation that is hard to resist….

    Just booking my ticket now!! ( only joking – you’re still safe 😀 )
    Daaaamn your good is an understatement Christina,
    love n hugs
    xxx

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    • LOL You’re so awesome Nick!!! haha booking your ticket lol 😉 Thank you sweet friend…for your generous praise!! These new little fictional forays…are ratther fun haha 😀

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