
΅〜 ೋღ ♥ ღೋ 〜΅
I look at you and I can see so deep inside… Almost an invitation to come in and traverse your complexity….΅〜 ❁ 〜΅
I see a brilliant artist…. A loving spirit…. A beautiful soul…. Burgeoning with love and adoration of life in all of its intricacies…. All of its resplendence…΅〜 ❁ 〜΅
I see one who cherishes each moment… One who feels pain intimately… Who knows how destructive it could be if allowed to reign supreme…. I see you fight….beyond the daily battle…΅〜 ❁ 〜΅
You create beauty….magical majesty…. Abstract in its completion…. Complex simplicity…. Sublime amalgamation of thought and emotion… Of vision… Of you….΅〜 ❁ 〜΅
I see you…. As we all are…. Who we could be… Would that we possess your strength, your fortitude….΅〜 ೋღ ❁ ღೋ 〜΅
Tell me your story…. Let me hear your words…. Else I shall have to read you…. Through your sad eyes…΅〜 ೋღ ♥ ღೋ 〜΅
΅〜 ೋ Christina〜 ೋ 〜΅
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I feel this one quite directly. It is beautiful, emotional and serene
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I am honored this could resonate with you so directly… Truly, I am grateful to receive such generous praise from you. Thank you!
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It is deserved. You are welcome.
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Ooooooh – Me LIKEY!
It feels like it’s personal to whoever reads this.
#Hugs #♡ #Smiles #Happiness #Peace #Blessings #FantabulousYOU #xoxo
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Yay!! I am quadruple happy you liked this one!!! Yes! that is what I was hoping for…a more personal read. You’re the bestest!
#Hugs #❤ #HugeSmiles #WishesForAHappyWeek #Blessings #AwesomazingYou #xoxo
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Lovely … look into the eyes .. anybodies eyes … just for a minute or so … saying hello, fellow human being … without words … I know … having worked psych for over 30 years now … I’m still mesmerised by … people’s eyes … Love, cat. http://catsruledogsdroole.blogspot.com/ and http://ckpeacemaker.wordpress.com/ … come and visit me if you have time … smiles …
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It does make me happy to meet a fellow observer of people…in my humble opinion the eyes are always the very best way to understand anyone…if we but look with intent to see. Mesmerizing indeed! I would imagine you have even more insight than most given your field of experience. What a fascinating concept…. ~ Thank you so very much for sharing your thoughts and links! I shall stop by as soon as I can! Hugs and Blessings for a great week Cat! ~
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Beautiful depth in this poem, I loved sinking into it as I read the lines. 🙂
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Angela, thank you ever so much for your very beautiful comment! It truly is a great joy to know you loved this! 🙂
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This is truly beautiful … you seem to get so close to some of what I feel… I remain amazed at what you pen… amazed
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Oh Bulldog….it is such an honor to have been, as you so wonderfully shared, able to write in such a manner that could be personal to you. Truly, that is a cherished gift…thank you so very much sweet friend!! Hugs and Wishes for a wonderful week ahead ~
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Although you are appealing to people to see the better part of themselves throughout their struggles, I initially read this as though you were looking in a mirror as it almost seems like a piece to yourself.
I love the side of you that mixes things up as you have been recently, giving us all two fold reading and playing with perspectives. If this is not an encouragement to bloggers everywhere to write about themselves then I don’t know what is.
There is a poignant form running through this piece, a gentle melancholy which is so evocative of moments past for all of us in varying degrees. I wonder at your thoughts, you have such depth and feeling to your poems. The joy is that you share them. That makes me right happy. xxxxxx
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That is most certainly such an awesome compliment…so much so…I find it hard to fathom the depth of it….that you would equate these words to me. I believe “gobsmacked” is the term used over on your side of the pond. It makes me exceedingly happy to hear your thoughts that I have been able to harness the words to express perspectives in such a varied manner of late.
That is an intriguing, compelling challenge concept….look in the mirror and write what you see. I wouldn’t be brave enough to share haha, as I am quite sure most wouldn’t…still a most fascinating idea….
If my words could evoke even a modicum of what you have suggested…then it would seem happiness is contagious for it makes me ever so happy…as well as honored….and beyond…plus 1. xxxxxx
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Hi Christina 😀 It’s lovely to read another facet of the diamond you have as thoughts. So honest !Take care (of your pen 😉 ) Ralph xoxox 😀
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Ralph….you do have such a way with words dear friend!! I’m….flummoxed now….”the diamond you have as thoughts”. That is….well I’m over the moon you enjoyed this one and quite obviously devoid of the ability to thank you properly haha 😉 See…you really did leave me speechless! 😀 I shall indeed take good care of said pen….and you take good care of you or I’ll hire someone to throw water balloons at you or something equally sinister 😉 Hugs and the best wishes for a happy week!! xoxoxo
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Haha !! *splish splash* xoxoxo 😯
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LOL I’m serious…you can’t see it but I’m wearing my “serious face” ! 🙂 xoxoxo
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Okay Christina, I believe you 😀 xoxox
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Christina…
I loved this one… Once again, there are so many layers in your poem, but I connect it overall with discovery and redemption,
Be thta as it may, love is always a hidden treasure.
My favorite stanza is the fourth one… I have found these verses truly beautiful:
“You create beauty….magical majesty….Abstract in its completion….
Complex simplicity….Sublime amalgamation of thought and emotion…
Of vision…Of you”….
Thanks for sharing my friend , it was nice to came across for words today,
Love & hugs, Aquileana 😉
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Aquileana, thank you so very very much sweet sweet friend! I love how you share your thoughts and which lines spoke to you the most. It is an honor that I always cherish!!
Truly, it never ceases to intrigue me how different people always take something unique to them from my words. It is a humbling and beautiful experience to say the least!!
It is late for me here but I shall head to bed soon smiling from your awesome thoughts and beautiful spirit!! Sending Love, Hugs, and wishes for a wonderful week full of joy!! 🙂
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What a beautiful comment sweetie, I cherish you too, Love to read your poems and words to me. I hope you have had slept well, despite all !…
Love and hugs for you too; Aquileana 😉
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By the way, Haruki Murakami is one my favorite writer: I adore the quote to ponder you have added here as a widget. I send you a link from my blog on MUrakami´s “Kafka on The Shore”; just in case you want to take a peak: http://aquileana.wordpress.com/2013/09/28/literatura-literature-haruki-murakami-kafka-en-la-orilla-kafka-on-the-shore/, xo Aquileana 🙂
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Oooo yes please! I’ve only recently discovered Murakami and the quote was taken from the only of his books that I have read (so far)… 1Q84. It is an epic book, being three books in one, but I loved it so much I read it in three weeks! 🙂
Your link is apropos sweet friend for “Kafka On The Shore” is at the very top of my “Ultimate Wish List” and most likely the next I shall acquire! No spoilers though right? 😉 I will most definitely check it out as soon as I can! xo 🙂
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Chris.. Well, now that you mention the spoilers. I guess . You are right, I think you´d better that post in particular after reading the book,!!!
Anyway, keep in mind that there are lots of Murakami´s books online to freely download, just in case you are interested.
Many hugs; Aquileana 😉
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Then perhaps I shall wait a bit to check out your link! I do like to come into a book…open… to see what I can see from it before hearing what others have gotten from it! 🙂 Thank you so much for the information about Murakami’s books being online. I do have one small request…I know it is easier to shorten my name, though I do prefer my full name. 🙂 Thank you again for all your awesome thoughts and info!! 🙂 Hugs and Blessings sweet friend ~
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Absolutely about the last request 😉
Your wishes are orders to me.. I mean it…
As to Murakami´s review I agree with you and think you should read it after getting through the book´s pages…
Have a restful night Christina, hugs for you,
Aquileana 😉
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You’re so sweet Aquileana, thank you so much! 🙂 I will most definitely visit that link after I’ve read it! Hugs and wishes for a great day/night/week!! 🙂 ~
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We often beg to know what the eyes so blatantly are telling us without asking. The true windows to the soul. This was beautiful! xo 🙂
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Indeed, they are the windows to the soul and reveal so very much if we not only look, but take the time to truly “see.” Thank you so very much dear friend for your amazingly cherished praise!! Sending hugs and wishes for a very very happy week ahead for you! xo 🙂
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Wishing you the same and sending you huge hugs (((hugs))) xo
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Wow! This is incredible beyond words. The way you describe this, the way you describe, the way you can see into the sad eyes. The way you know you can look further into the eyes. Knowing you know what you will be able to see through the sad eyes.
Beautiful …
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Thank you….sincerely so very very much! I am an avid observer of people…I look because I wish to see…I long to know. It is like a mystery to me, one I strive to solve. There were a few pivotal moments recently that led me to think on this…and these words are what came from that contemplation. Your thoughts and insight are always so cherished…thank you (again) so very much sweet friend!!! Sending hugs and happy wishes for your week!
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It is sometimes amazing what we can see when we look deep enough – and sometimes terrifying (one of the reasons I have attempted to stop)
I think that when moments cause inspiration like this to allow poetry like yours to come into being, then those moments can’t be all bad (if they were bad to start with – they might have been good ones hehe)
I hope you have a great week Christina.
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I do agree….it is amazing, and a gift if chosen to see it that way. Inspiration does come from the most unexpected places!! Thank you for sharing your thoughts and for the wishes for a great week….I send the same to you as well!!! 🙂
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“Tell me your story….
Let me hear your words….
Else I shall have to read you….
Through your sad eyes…”
… this is so beautiful. Great work – as usual.
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Thank you ever so much Noora!! It is always exciting for me if I can write something that resonates with others. I am so happy you enjoyed this one!!
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When I first read this Christina, I immediately related to looking in the mirror at myself and felt that you may be speaking to yourself, but as I read on there was the distinct feeling that you were writing this to someone who had completely captivated you, whose allure cannot be denied. This is what makes you a brilliant writer Christina, your ability to weave so many viewpoints into one piece of work! 🙂
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Oh LuAnn…you just leave me speechless dear friend! How to I make the words “Thank you” more than just two words when I wish them to be so much more. Your awesome encouragement and support mean so very much to me!!! I do so cherish your thoughts and insight!! You’re the bestest!! Sending gratitude, love and wishes for a happy weekend❤❤❤!!
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Have a wonderful weekend also Christina. We are now in the Keys and the weather is pretty near perfect so I am thinking we will have a nice weekend. 🙂
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I am very very happy to hear that!! Thank you dearest friend, I shall do my very best to have a wonderful weekend, though with two extra kids in the house (friends of kids spending weekend here) should be interesting to say the least haha! Soak up some awesome sunshine and take a deep breath of that oh so very missed salty air for me would you? 😉 Hugs and love to you ❤❤❤!!!
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Will do! 🙂
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Yay! Thank you! I feel more relaxed already 😉
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Christina, i can’t tell you how many times i’ve returned to this profoundly resonant poem, it could be written on my mirror.
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I am truly honored this could resonate with you so deeply! Thank you…for sharing that it has, it does mean so much to me that you have!
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A powerful one, Christina.
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Thank you so so much Celestine! 🙂
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