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Cacophony…Noise….Disquiet….
It is too much…
All of it…
Let me be still…
I want to think my quiet little thoughts in surround sound of silence…
Let comfort be my pillow and tranquility my blanket….
If words were my ocean…let me dip my toes into the pool of serenity….
let them swirl about soothing me…whisper intrigue…
as they entwine to form expression of emotion…
A thought…a feeling…a wish…
They encircle me filling me with wonder at their joining…
Fascination at their power…
Yes…please…
Let me be…just for awhile longer…
If I am very still…they come to me…dance for me…bring me tears…delight…placidity…
a quixotic smile at their unique denouement…
Yes…please…
Let me be…
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🙂 You need to publish these… seriously…
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Thank you Richard!! I very much appreciate your vote of confidence and encouragement! 😀 Hugs ~
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I love the way you write. I love the way you use words that most people wouldn’t and yet with you they are natural as if they were used everyday by everybody. You have been churning these out really fast of late and they are fantastic, magnificent. Some of your very best.
Well done Christina
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Alastair 😀 Thank you so so much!! I have to admit…I do have a life-long love affair with words lol 😉 You always say the most wonderful and encouraging things…thank you very very much sweet friend! Hugs ~
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I will say (somewhat embarrassingly) that I do have to go and define some words that you use, and yet you slot them in as if they were “the”, “and”, “poetry”, “beauty” etc. As if they were everyday words and I admire that in you, plus the magnificence of the work you come out with. Keep it up my friend. I thoroughly look forward to reading your poetry.
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Thank you so much for your very sweet words!! You do make me smile!!! 😀
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You’re welcome. I enjoy your work so if I can make you smile, then I am happy. 🙂
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I like the flow of thought and the strong ending. Beautiful artwork and amazing poetry.
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Thank you so much John!! I’m very very happy you enjoyed this! 😀
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Speaks of the yearning to just be one with self ~ unencumbered by the distractions and stresses of daily living ~ escapism to a place of blissful escape. I find the blogging offers us this in such a unique way… and unlike writing in a private journal — there is something about knowing you have shared this sacred piece of yourself – your soul with the world… makes that “peace” or this “bliss” last a little longer — Beautiful work Christina ~ your writing has taken on a wonderful life of its own ~ So much love my beloved friend xo Robyn
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Oh Robyn! I know I always say this, but it truly bears repeating….you always know exactly where I’m coming from when I write these…even if I don’t lol! 😀 Yes…just some peace from the world…with my love ~ words ~ 🙂 Agreed! Sharing here is exactly as you described!!! I couldn’t have said it better! I hope you are well…you are all ways in my thoughts and prayers beloved friend ♥♥♥♥!!!
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xxoo so much love your way dearest beloved! ~ R
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I hope you are circulating these to publishers if not planning to self publish, you have such a fantastic way with words. I enjoy visiting your world and seeing it through your eyes…enchanting.
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Ste J 😀 You have no idea how much that means to me….coming from you…seriously…thank you doesn’t seem big enough!! And maybe just the push I needed? 😉
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yes, many pushes (although not near cliffs or roads), you have talent and I am big fan, so please, please look into it. If not for me, for the children!
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LOL oh you have me cracking up today….lol not near cliffs or roads! You had me at “fan”! For that and of course for the children lol….I shall endeavor to make it so!! 😀
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Yes, yes and thrice YES, I’m so excited I sound like a choking dog. (No humans or animals were harmed during the making of this statement).
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Yay! 🙂 LOL Oh…you are making me laugh so hard today….LOVE the disclaimer and am most pleased no animals were harmed! 😀
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Magnificent! Yes, start looking for a publisher, for sure! 🙂 xx
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Thank you….that you would think so….along with everyone else…well I’m quite….happily overwhelmed with the wonder of it all 😀
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Christina – Poetry is in your blood!
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Rosy 😀 !!! Thank you…I had no idea…but it feels so right to write…lol maybe I CAN rhyme lol 😉 Hoping you are well today…hugs sweet friend!!
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I agree with all of your other commenters Christina, a book of your poetry would be a beautiful piece of work to own. Your writing is exquisite. 🙂
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LuAnn 😀 !! I’m beginning to think you all know something I don’t….haha…thinking I’ll just listen to my cherished friends here and go with it!! Who knows what wonderful things could happen? 🙂 Hugs!!
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You have such a wonderful talent Cru! I am always so delighted to see a new poem…. and most of the time I reread the older ones too. just beautiful and emotion filled and thought provoking ! Hope you and the kids are doing well. xoxoxo your long lost friend, Toni
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Toni!! Thank you so much for following along my written journey…can’t really express how much that means to me…all your sweet praise! 😀 I’m glad we’ve reconnected! And for the record….you’re one of like 2 people who are allowed to change my name lol 😉 Sending hugs and love!! xxxx
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I agree wholeheartedly with all the lovely comments above, Christina. 🙂
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Celestine :D!! Thank you…I feel so very blessed to have so many amazing friends here who think so highly of what I share….thank you again sweet friend!! Hugs & Blessings ~
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Your words are very delightful and quite refreshing
You are a poet of mysterious, cunning, and fascinations.
I’m glad were friends and that I get to learn more about you.
🙂
P.S Stay tune in about half – Hour…I will be posting up my new blog.
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Thank you so much for your generous praise sweet friend :D!!!
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You’re welcome….Sorry I haven’t been around lately. I’ve been working on something big. On Monday, I will be posting up my new blog. Its been awhile…Have you read my work? If so, what do you think? I’d like to hear some of your inputs. 🙂
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My New Blog: Our Virtue Smells like Jazz-Tampons. http://charliezero1.wordpress.com/2013/02/11/our-virtue-smells-like-jazz-tampons/ Your inputs are most appreciated.
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I will certainly check it out when I can…thank you 🙂
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AnElephantCant stand too much noise
Sometimes peace seems like an impossibility
But when his soul is immersed
In Christina’s verse
He finds serenity and blissful tranquillity
Thank you
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AnElephantCan leave the most wonderfulest comments…and never ever fails to make me smile with his ever so thoughtful praise 😀 !!!
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AnElephantCant always be serious
Sometimes he does like to joke you know
But you would be wrong
To think his nose is long
Because he tells fibs like Pinocchio
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Magnificent! my friend ,Have nice day .with love maxima
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Thank you so very very much Maxima!!! 😀 Hugs&Blessings ~
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Christina, I love the embracing touch of the life in your words…breathtakingly beautiful!
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Wendell 🙂 you always bring a huge smile to me when you come visit and gift me with your very generous praise!! Thank you so much sweet friend…I do appreciate you! Blessings ~
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Indeed, the quiet is a warm, soft blanket against a cold and noisy world. Great song choice as well. There must be an answer…let it be.
Tim
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Agreed!! 😀 Thank you Tim!!
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I like this very much
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Thank you 😀 !!
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mmm…still got it Christina 🙂
xxx
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Thank you sweet friend!! 😀 !!! xxxx
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Brilliant writing…Primo poetry! 🙂
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Thank you so very much…I am truly honored you think so! 🙂
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