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You look into me…
Me into you….
We meet there in the middle…
Captivated…
Need drives its own insistent desire to inception…
Embraced in this perfect moment…
Held by the enigmatic nature of will…
Unable to look away…
Locked in place….
Locked in time…
Don’t look away…
Keep me here as I memorize your soul with mine…
Let us stay suspended in wonder….
Before reality’s ocean rips us apart….
We are helpless in its wake….
Fate’s cruelty using us as pawns for pleasure….
Neither here nor there….
Our moment permanently fixed in the stars for all time…
Love…without completion…without end…
Forever captivated….
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I like this… beautifully written with crystal clear imagery 🙂
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Thank you Richard! 🙂
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This is a lovely piece, truly draws one in on a fantastic journey.
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Thank you so much! I’m very happy you enjoyed this 🙂
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AnElephantCant count with much skill
So he may owe sweet Christina an apology
But before we cross swords
Is this beautiful verse
Really the fourth one in your trilogy
But seriously, this is stupendaciously wonderful.
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LOL I think AnElephantCan count….no need to cross swords…for yes I believe it is no longer a trilogy but instead a quadrilogy 🙂
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“Need drives its own insistent desire to inception” …a perfect example of why I read you. That is the paint I was referring to before. 🙂
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DB, thank you so very much…just the remembrance of that makes me smile…keeps me smiling! 🙂
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Wow. The clarity of your words. It’s almost like I can see what you see. Turning it from a trilogy to a quadrilogy (had to look up to see if that was a word hehe) was inspired.
I like all of the poetry you have posted, but this … this has to be one of your very best. Thank you for sharing it with us.
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Alastair…thank you so very much sweet friend! I do always appreciate your generous praise and encouragement!! Huge hugs! ~
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I give praise where it is due my friend. Your writing is truly inspiring. You really should consider publishing your work.
You have an amazing gift, and I thank you for sharing it with us all. I am .. I don’t want to assume for the rest of your readers but I imagine they are … honoured that you post your gift for us all to see.
Thank you my friend. Huge hugs to you
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Reblogged this on Alastair's Blog and commented:
Absolutely brilliant piece.
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Reblogged this on Simon Sundaraj-Keun.
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Thank you 😀
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How truly beautiful! Hugs Paula x
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Thank you Paula!! 😀
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This is awesome ❤ I love it
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Sleepy, thank you…so much! I am very happy you enjoyed this! 🙂
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Beautiful, simply exquisite! No other words needed here! 🙂
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Thank you so so very much!! 😀
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You are amazing ~ you know how to draw out deep emotion from the human soul.
I guess this inception is preparing many for love that can be fulfilled in the light of the imagination
You have so much to give Christina
Great job & amazing gift
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Oh PJ…what an incredibly amazing compliment!! 😀 Thank you much sweet friend…I cannot tell you how much I appreciate you and your very sweet praise and encouragement!! Hugs & Blessings ~
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Brilliant and beautiful, Christina 🙂
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Celestine, thank you! It makes me so happy you liked this..I sincerely appreciate you dear friend!! 😀
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I agree ~ brilliant and beautiful – and ever so CAPTIVATING. I love where you are going this year with your style of writing. Ever so exciting to know that for the brief moment I am visiting your page ~ I will be swept away somewhere….
much love my beloved Christina ~
xR
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Robyn….thank you so much!! I have to say I am really enjoying these fictional pieces….there is a huge sense of freedom and something inexplicably fun about it!! 😀 I am so happy that I get to bring you along a little journey with me…you are a most awesome and cherished travel companion!! Hugs and so so much love beloved friend ♥♥♥♥!!
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words are not enough…but those already written are so true…magnificient.
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Thank you len 😀 so so very much!!!
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Sorry – I nearly forgot. just before I was about to go to bed. Hope you have (or have had depending on the time over there) a great birthday.
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Thank you Alastair…I did have a nice birthday! 😀
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I’m glad. Hope you had wonderful surprises.
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Your writing is always so full of emotion that I feel it.
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Thank you so very much Rosy….see…you always give not only the bestest comments but smiles too! 😀
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You have a unique way of pulling us in, holding us captive, filling us full of emotion. Your words are truly exquisite Christina.
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Oh LuAnnn…thank you…I’m so grateful for you and your ability to always make me feel so encouraged and driven…thank you again dear friend!! 🙂
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beautiful as usual. belated happy birthday? all the best 🙂
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Thank you Neil!! So so much 🙂 Hugs ~
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Excellent!!!
You are wonderfull, dear, sweet CHRISTINA!! 🙂
HI
Claude
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Claude, thank you so so much! I’m so happy you enjoyed this!! 🙂
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Christina, your words always serenade like a beautiful love song! Their embrace is indeed captivating! Wonderful poem dear sister!
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Oh! Thank you so very much 😀 You are always so generous with the best encouragement and sweet praise…you are appreciated sweet friend! 🙂
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How can I have missed this Christina.. Mesmerising!
I hope life is treating you well my friend,
Love n hugs
xxx
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Thank you so much!! 😀 Yes, mostly, life is good….and the “mostly” is just “normal” life stuff…..which is much preferred to the abnormal life stuff of the past few years….wow…clear as mud? haha Sending love and hugs to you! xxxx
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Clear as clear Christina 😀
There is a lightness and joy in your replies which is great to see.
Its about tIme life returned to ” normal ” for you. Its great to see!
Take care my dear friend, hope you have a fab weekend
Love n hugs
Xxx
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“Keep me here as I memorize your soul with mine”
That is exquisite!
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Thank you sweet friend!! Truly a cherished compliment to me as I do admire your writing so very much! 🙂
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Bravo! 🙂
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Thank you!!! So much 😀 !!
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