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Can you feel my presence?
I can feel yours…
Enticing me…
Sometimes you’re like a soft breeze…
A delicate whisper…
Gentle and knowing…
Beckoning me…
Sometimes you’re like waves crashing…
washing over me…through me…intoxicating me…
Can you feel it?
That illusory electric spark…
Magnetic…
Addictive…
Taunting…
Seductive…
Divine torment…
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You want me?
Come find me…
Make up your mind.
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This is the last of a fictional series that began with Edge of Peripheral & Decadance In The Dark. I have to give special thanks to Eris of Discord for sparking my imagination with an incredible poem in the comments of and inspired by Edge of Peripheral.
Also many many thanks to my other amazing friends who requested I do follow up to the first in this entertaining little surreal fantasy.
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∼ Reconstructing Christina ∼ 
Absolutely amazing. To come out with three fantastic poems so close to each other, all fictional are .. well, brilliant is the only thing I can think of. I love the idea that you did the trilogy of poems.
Your imagination is matched only by your skill with poetry., Awesome 🙂
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Alastair, thank you so much dear friend…might have to disappoint you in there is a fourth coming…so it is no longer a trilogy…hopefully you will like it anyway 😀 Your praise is always so generous and encouraging…you are appreciated! Hugs ~
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Oh wow. I can’t wait for the last piece. It is now a quadrilogy 😀 I’m sure I will like it. I haven’t found a poem of yours I haven’t liked yet. And you’re welcome.
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Exquisite, Christina 🙂
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Celestine…always so so very appreciative of your sweet praise!! 😀 Hugs ~
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Another top bit of blogging, each line seems (to me at least) as if it’s said on a breath of wind. To me it gives it a melancholy ans altogether solitary air. Almost gothic. I like a lot.
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Ste J, thank you!! I am more than thrilled you enjoyed this and I am honored, truly, by your description….always fascinating to me how each piece is interpreted by different people 😀
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everything is objective, and one’s experiences change words subtley in a unique way no one else can foresee. Your work makes me happy.
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Very True….and your comments…make me happy 😀
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Interestingly that comment made me happy.
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Trilogy!! YES! Love this dear Christina ~ something about your writing is just addicting. This last group — mystical and magical… like you are a ‘spirit’ ~ waiting in the shadows to bless some lucky creature! ~ Enjoyed immensely – will you go for part IV? ~ Hugs to you beloved friend ~ Robyn
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Robyn…thank you!! So happy you enjoyed this…was really quite fun going to the fictional place….might move in there haha! You are such an encouragement to me….in fact…your description….has indeed prompted a fourth…guess it’s a series now? lol Thank you beloved friend…always so very very appreciative of you! Hugs and Love ♥♥♥♥!!
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This was so seductive and sexy. I can feel the want as I read this. Loved every word of it. Hope you don’t mind if I reblog this on my blog.
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Oh!! Thank you so much 😀 I am honored that you not only loved this but reblogged, truly!
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Reblogged this on A Dog With Fleas and commented:
I read each word of this with baited breath. Loved every word of this seductive poem.
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A dare – Love it!
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LOL You leave the bestest comments Rosy, always make me smile 😀 Yes…a dare….but wait…there’s more (insert suspenseful music) 😉
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It seems like a dream and real all at the same time….Great writing!
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Thank you, so much!! I am more than happy that you enjoyed this…and also very appreciative of your very kind praise 🙂
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Oh Christina, it seems as if you have released some bottled up emotions and I can just imagine your fingers flying over the keys as these feelings become words on the screen. This trilogy is truly brilliant. Your writing just continues to get richer and deeper.
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LuAnn 😀 Yes!! It did seem that way…thank you so much sweet friend for your encouragement and generous praise!! I am…just so happy it has been so well received…in fact….it’s not a trilogy anymore….there is a fourth coming…I am really really enjoying the fiction of it!! 😀 Hugs ~
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Can’t wait! 🙂
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AnElephantCant believe this poem
Although it is truly wondrous
Addictive?
Seductive?
Sweet words of love – or lust?
Phhheeewwww!
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Haha!! Oh…I really did laugh out loud!! Yes…fiction….love or lust? Well that’s up to the reader now isn’t it? Each piece of writing is intriguingly interpreted differently by each person 😉
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Ooops dumb Elephant
Quote in wrong place
All red in the face
AnElephant weeps
It’s the company he keeps
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AnElephantCant interpret poems sensibly
Although he does try to be quite intriguing
Is this fact or fiction
AnElephant’s predilection
Is almost interesting but totally fatiguing
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Daaaamn your good 😉
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Well…thank you!! 😀 This did give me a huge smile…thanks for that too!
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So very hauntingly beautiful…your words paint a complete picture of a yearning heart in love. Awesome poem Christiana…you are a true romantic!
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Thank you! 😀 I am indeed….a hopeless romantic! I believe love is the greatest gift given to us mere mortals….in every aspect…children, family, relationships, friendships…all of it…so very precious!
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Brilliant Christina, I love your last three sentences,
You want me?
Come find me…
Make up your mind
They are striking in their simplicity, but at the same time full of mystery and promise, guille and secrets, with an invitation that is hard to resist….
Just booking my ticket now!! ( only joking – you’re still safe 😀 )
Daaaamn your good is an understatement Christina,
love n hugs
xxx
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LOL You’re so awesome Nick!!! haha booking your ticket lol 😉 Thank you sweet friend…for your generous praise!! These new little fictional forays…are ratther fun haha 😀
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