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I feel your gaze…a soft caress…
I see you between the pale light of the rising moon and deep shadows…
There and not there..
Waiting…
Come find me…
Dance this subtly surreal dance with me…
Decadence in the dark…
Let us stay in the hidden peripheral..
I, in the trance of twilight’s tempestuous temptation…
You, on the edge of everything and nothing…
There… not there…
Come find me…
Take my hand…
Rescue me…
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Beautiful and painful. May they, one day, take your hand…
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Thank you DB….it is but fantasy….somehthing new for me…I very much appreciate you sharing your insightful thoughts 🙂
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Such a wonderful and sad poem. I do hope that they come for you, that they take your hand and lead you out of the dark. I always marvel at how well you put these together.
Another brilliant poem Christina. Thank you for sharing this with us.
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Thank you so much Alastair 😀 Your steadfastness in friendship and encouragement definitely keep me going…and smiling 🙂
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Thank you, and you’re welcome. Nice to know I can keep someone smiling 🙂 Makes my day. You don’t need any encouragement, you are already exceedingly good.
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Heartfelt lines. Beauty in sadness. On the edge…that fine line between the darkness and…
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Esenga…thank you…yes…exactly!! 🙂
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Oh how sad. But – so beautiful.
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Thank you so much Rosy!! 🙂
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Love this. I can read the future in between your lines. The seductive playful quality as you gently entice the unknown mysterious future waiting just on the peripheral of reality. Just excellent and filled with the fantasy of romance and adventure. Wonderful! 🙂
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WOA…that one was pretty intense, I think my blood pressure went up by few notches reading through this. Without naming names, this damsel in distress need to be rescued ASAP and be doing some Pasodoble before the night is over!!!
Come on mom, gotta find a dance partner for this girl already 🙂
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Christopher! 🙂
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was that a high fist shaking “Christopher!” or hot tea sipping “Christopher!”.lol
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That was a hmmmm! … None of the above! Just so you know you brighten our lives! 🙂
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Chris!!! LOL You’re going to make me blush…no wait…you already have! haha Guess I should be prepared for this if I’m going to write like that 😉
As for the Paso doble….well we can talk about that another time…in the meanwhile I’ll work on my disclaimer that my posts may cause a temporary rise in blood pressure LOL 😉
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Thank you so much, that’s exactly what this was meant to be….have to admit…was a lot of fun to create, and again I feel obligated and honor bound to acknowledge Eris for that amazing Poem in the comments of Edge of Peripheral….mutual inspiration! 😀
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Love you! 🙂
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AnElephantCant always get it together
To comment on the lovely one’s verse
He is once more amazed
At the elegance and grace
She displays in her rich haunting words
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AnElephant knows how to not only encourage a girl…but make her beam with his praise! 😀 Hugs ~
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Wonderfully sensuous
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Thank you so much Celestine!! Coming from you (being so very gifted with words)….well it means a whole lot to me 😀
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Simply breathtaking Christina, i hope your hand is taken and that you are rescued soon
Thank you for posting this 🙂
Love n hugs xxx
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Thank you so much Nick!! 🙂 This was just a fun little journey into fiction…I discovered through this adventure how much I love putting words together and these words were inspired by another’s words…yes I think I’ve definitely found something that brings me great joy. 🙂 Love and Hugs ~xxxx
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Another ~ Fantastic — something really special about this series! xxoo Love to you always, R
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