“Where beams of imagination play,
The memory’s soft figures melt away.”
~Alexander Pope ~
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Can you see me?
Can you see all that’s happened…
All that’s changed me…
The metamorphosis…the struggle, fear, determination,
unbearable solitude…
Forced strength coming from a place even I didn’t know existed…
A million tears…
Ripped in half…
Smiling on the outside to cover so much…
too much…
Packed up..
Locked away…
Hidden on purpose from myself…
Can you see me?
The real me…
deep inside like you used to?
Ready to break out of this suffocating cocoon…
Ready to be free…to fly…
Can you see?
I’m almost there…
All that’s left is buried in me…
Can you see?
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Copyright © 2012 by Christina Brownlee ~
Its such a nice piece.. thank you for writing 🙂
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Thank you so much for sharing your kind thoughts 🙂
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Holding onto someone or something is difficult….but holding on to the real self is the most challenging.
In a world plagued with deprived worth…a well written piece of introspection into the REAL ME…
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I am always so very very appreciative of your thoughts, insight, and encouragement 🙂 Thank you sweet friend!
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reflections of some untainted conscience of yours !
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Fantastic christina , my words has failed me, but one thing, being in touch with oneself is great & expressing it in writing is amazing.
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Thank you Peter…your words didn’t fail you 😀 ! I thank the amazing community here to help give me the courage and freedom to be able to express myself in ways that I never did before…thank you dear friend!
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I read this and thought, that’s me! Thank you for putting it into the words I’d struggle to find.
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Oh Debs 🙂 I’m so honored that you were able to connect with this. Thank you so much for sharing your sweet thoughts 🙂
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Very nice. And very true.
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Thank you Mondrak, I really appreciate your sweet thoughts 🙂
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After reading your latest poems, and posts, this brings so much more clarity. It’s not just “Very nice and very true” It is exquisite and totally heartfelt.
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“All that’s left is buried in me…”
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Yes…this sort of just spilled out all at once…I really wanted to ask you to borrow a line that is stuck in my head from one of your incredible poems…”My saddness makes you immortal…” There a line for a line… 🙂 Thank you for stopping by, really really appreciate you 🙂
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you can borrow any line you want, christina 🙂
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Yay! Thank you so very much! 😀
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Yes, you are almost there, ready to fly.
Superb.
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Thank you so very very much! Your encouragement and praise so very appreciated sweet friend! 🙂
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Hi Christina,
another pair of brilliant post ( together with Facade )
Do the people that these pieces are aimed at ever get to read them?
They say so much about your struggle and your resilience.
I hope that your last few lines are fact, and that you are ready.. ready to progress.
Fly free, fly high, my friend
love n hugs and blessings to you Christina
xxx
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Seadog, thank you so much…such high praise, I’m so very flattered and honored! 🙂 Um, no…or maybe they do read them? I don’t know. I’ve told them this before (less eloquently)…seems I am invisible. Sooo…this is more for me…to get it out of me.
I feel with each step forward…I am almost ready to fly 🙂
Love, hugs, and blessings to you friend!!
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I’ve only been following your blog for a little while, but I really like your blog, so I have nominated you for the ONE LOVELY BLOG award.
http://kattermonran.com/2012/08/01/one-lovely-blog-award/
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Thank you Mondrak…I’m very very appreciative and honored that you would share this with me! 😀 Blessings! ~
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You’re welcome 🙂
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Your poetry stirs the heart and mind. It makes me want to write poems again. It has been a while… ~ Wendy
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I’m honored that your creative spark would be lit by this! You should most definitely write poems again…such a wonderful way to express every aspect of humanity. 🙂 Thank you so much for sharing your sweet thoughts! Blessings ~
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Amazing poem ,beautiful feelings.
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Thank you jalal, I really appreciate your sweet thoughts! 🙂 Blessings ~
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Oh wow Christina ~ this is extremely potent! Very strong and very direct. Your writing superb and expressive. I can feel your determination and spirit as I read – even the rhythm of your verse has power. I am so happy you are “almost there” — Each step you take toward your liberation – your freedom is a wonderful step to be savored. Much Love my friend — and Brava to you for your courage and creativity in this mission xo Robyn
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Princess Robyn 😉 you always say such incredibly wonderful things that always brightens my day and encourages me to step further and further into the future that is waiting. Thank you so much for being you, for your empathy, insight, and encouragement…you are so very appreciated sweet friend! Love, Hugs, and Blessings for a wonderful day!! ~
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Awww – it’s comes easy to know what comment to make on your blog Christina… feel like I’m pretty in tune with you !! Thank you dear friend ~ xo
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You’re so sweet 😀 And yes, I would wholeheartedly agree you are completely in tune with me!! 🙂 Huge Hugs and wishes for a wonderful rest of the day for you <3!!!
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So much depth of feeling, powerful descriptions…wow! 🙂
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I’m very honored and flattered by your praise! Thank you for sharing your thoughts, means so much to me…really! 🙂
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